The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy

What a city owes, and who ends up paying it.

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A Pied Piper retelling built on a genuinely provocative idea: the people a whole continent blames for its plagues are the only ones whose blood can stop them. Rich on politics and consent, weaker on pacing, and it closes on a cliffhanger a group will want to argue about.

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A governor stands in a ruined street facing a man who has just saved his city, and is handed a bill for thirty thousand coins. He cannot pay it. He says so in front of the citizens he spent the previous night refusing to help, the ones he had been selling their own municipal water back to by the jar. The stranger offers an alternative price, payable in people: one hundred and thirty of them, no questions permitted about what they are for. The governor says yes almost before the sentence is finished, turns around, and walks back into his manor without looking at anyone. The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy spends the next five hundred pages on the part of the old legend nobody ever writes down, which is the question of what the piper actually wanted.

Why Raven Kennedy Chose This Legend

The furniture is familiar and it has been rebuilt rather than redecorated. A walled town, an infestation, a musician with a coloured cloak and an unhonoured contract. What has changed is that the taking is the opening of the story and not its punchline, and that the people taken are adults, children and, disproportionately, the despised.

The world of The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy explains that last detail. Three decades before the novel starts, the world cracked and the molten core of it came up through the fissures. Fae who survived the contact became Core fae, marked by red stains on the tips of their ears, and carrying magic that is quietly killing them because no fae body was built to hold it. Nine antlered creatures also came up out of those cracks, each releasing a single plague, and spent five years destroying everything before they were put down. Their children by fae women are born with horns as well as pointed ears. They are called fiends, they number in the hundreds, and every misfortune from a bad harvest to a lost dice game is filed against them.

The narrator is one of these. Esti Calyx makes paper at her aunt’s mill, hides her horns under a veil, cares for a mother whose seizures are getting worse, and keeps two small talents to herself: she can read three true words of character off any face the first time she meets its eyes, and her fingernails betray her moods in colour. Being whipped raw for missing curfew by sixty seconds is a normal risk of her week.

The Bargain at the Heart of The Sweetest Fiend

The reason to bring this to a group is the idea holding it up, which arrives around the midpoint and reframes everything before it.

A fiend was murdered by a mob during a hail storm some months earlier, and the hail stopped falling over the ground where he bled out. From that single coincidence a Core fae with a blood-scenting gift has assembled a hypothesis: a fiend’s blood can shut down the one plague loosed by the creature who fathered them, and a small sustainable quantity of it, repeated often enough, may stop plagues from arriving at all.

Which makes the most reviled population on the continent the only cure for the thing it is blamed for. The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy refuses to treat that purely as irony. It follows the consequences a reader will spot immediately, chiefly that a few hundred people are about to become the most valuable commodity alive, and that every ruler who learns this will have an incentive to collect them rather than protect them. The abductions are staged as the least bad option available in a world with no institutions worth trusting, and the novel does not pretend this makes them clean.

What the Book Asks a Reader to Forgive

Set against that, the romance in The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy has a harder job. The piper is Varrik, Core fae, governor of a large territory, famous across the continent, and for the first third he is casually vile to the woman he is holding: she is a debt, she is spoiled stock, she smells. Later chapters recast this as a man refusing to examine an attraction he did not ask for. Some readers will accept the exchange and some will not, which makes it useful discussion material rather than a flaw to be settled.

There is one structural idea that does real work here. Core magic survives only by fastening onto another person’s life force, and until this novel it had only ever fastened onto ordinary fae. One Core fae here overspent himself clearing a single storm, was never matched with anybody, and is now dying by degrees in a cabin as the living proof of the cost. Because the magic will not fasten unless attraction already exists, the bond formalises something rather than manufacturing it, which is a more interesting arrangement than fate.

Where The Sweetest Fiend Sags

  • Pacing. The captivity stretch cycles through the same sequence, roughly flight, recapture, argument, wound dressing, three times over. A group will feel the repetition.
  • Exposition. One character stands on open ground and talks the entire hypothesis through, with the onlookers around her raising every objection a reader would. Functional, and visibly so.
  • Tone. Roughly half of The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy is considerably more explicit than its opening advertises, and the shift is abrupt enough that a group should be warned before choosing it.
  • Opposition. The ex-boyfriend, the hostile fiend and the venal governor are all doing a single job each, and they look flimsy beside the worldbuilding.
  • The ending. It stops in mid-air. Nothing detonated in the final pages is resolved.
  • Content to weigh first. A public flogging and an infected wound cleaned without anaesthetic; people devoured by vermin on the page; mass plague deaths including children; abduction and confinement; sustained bigotry with slurs and ritual gestures; the rape of an entire generation of women as the founding fact of the setting, referenced throughout; chronic illness and seizures; infant abandonment; several graphic sex scenes with dominance elements.

Where The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy earns its length is in two extended sequences. In one, a settlement is being buried alive by falling ash, and the piper stands at its gate playing survivors up out of the drifts, extracting a fraction of the population and losing more of them on the walk to safety. In the other, four Core fae sit around a campfire and describe, without self-pity, what the day of the cracking did to each of them. That conversation contains more world than any of the explanatory scenes.

For groups who finish The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy and want a comparable shelf, The Swan’s Daughter by Roshani Chokshi is the best pairing for a discussion about reworking inherited stories, and The River Has Roots by Amal El-Mohtar does something similar at a fraction of the page count. For the same appetite at full length, try The House Saphir by Marissa Meyer, or What Sleeps Within the Cove by Harper L. Woods for the bargain-and-obligation flavour. Readers who want the captor-and-captive setup handled with more polish should look at Filthy Rich Fae by Geneva Lee.

After the Last Page

Kennedy has form for this. Her previous series took the Midas myth and spent six books turning a punchline about gold into something about ownership, and the same instinct is at work here: find a story everyone half-remembers, locate the part that was never explained, and build in the gap. The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy is the first instalment of that project, so it is being judged on foundations rather than on a finished house.

What a group will still be arguing about an hour later is not the piper or the plagues. It is a single line of characterisation that the novel plants in its opening chapters and then declines to point at again. A woman who can read three true things about anyone she looks at, who read this man on their first meeting, and who decided to trust him regardless of what she had already been told.

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A Pied Piper retelling built on a genuinely provocative idea: the people a whole continent blames for its plagues are the only ones whose blood can stop them. Rich on politics and consent, weaker on pacing, and it closes on a cliffhanger a group will want to argue about.The Sweetest Fiend by Raven Kennedy