In a world where rom-coms often follow predictable paths with picture-perfect protagonists, Lauren Marie Fleming’s debut novel “Because Fat Girl” deliberately veers off script. This refreshing contemporary romance tackles the intersection of body positivity, queer identity, and Hollywood dreams with equal parts heart and critique. While not without its rough edges, the novel offers a necessary voice in the evolving landscape of inclusive romance literature.
Plot & Premise: More Than Just Another Hollywood Story
Diana Smith isn’t your typical romantic lead—she’s fat, queer, and unapologetically herself in an industry that often demands conformity. After grief derails her promising film career, she finds herself working as a personal shopper while living with her sister and niblings in suburban Los Angeles. A chance encounter with action star Drew Williams at a charity gala sets in motion a series of events that could either resurrect her filmmaking dreams or confirm her worst fears about Hollywood’s treatment of those who don’t fit the mold.
Strengths: Authenticity in the Details
Rich Character Development
Fleming excels at creating complex, flawed characters who feel deeply real. Diana’s struggle with imposter syndrome, her fierce protectiveness of her queer identity, and her complicated relationship with her sister Cecily are particularly well-rendered. The author doesn’t shy away from showing Diana’s occasional pettiness or self-sabotaging behaviors, making her triumph all the more meaningful when it arrives.
Industry Insights
The novel’s behind-the-scenes look at Hollywood feels authentic rather than glossy. From the politics of casting to the subtle discrimination faced by marginalized creators, Fleming demonstrates intimate knowledge of the industry’s workings while maintaining narrative momentum.
Found Family Dynamics
The supporting cast shines, particularly:
- Janelle, Diana’s steadfast best friend and cinematographer
- Chris Stanson, the surprisingly layered action star
- Jaqueline Williams, Drew’s lesbian mother and successful author
- Shamaya, the social media influencer with depth beyond her surface
Areas for Improvement
Pacing Issues
The novel occasionally struggles with pacing, particularly in the middle sections where multiple subplots compete for attention. The resolution of certain conflicts feels rushed compared to their build-up.
Romance Development
While the chemistry between Diana and Drew is palpable, their relationship sometimes takes a backseat to industry politics and family drama. Some readers might wish for more intimate moments between the leads to better justify their emotional connection.
Thematic Heavy-Handedness
At times, the book’s messaging about inclusion and representation becomes didactic, pulling readers out of the story. While these themes are crucial to the narrative, a lighter touch might have served them better.
Writing Style & Voice
Fleming’s prose is conversational and quick-witted, peppered with pop culture references and industry jargon that adds authenticity without becoming overwhelming. The author particularly excels at humor, using it to tackle difficult subjects while maintaining emotional resonance.
Social Commentary & Representation
The novel doesn’t just include diversity – it examines the complexities and contradictions of representation in Hollywood. Fleming explores:
- Fat liberation and body politics
- Queer identity and biphobia
- Mental health and grief
- Family dynamics and sisterhood
- Class privilege and access
Impact & Significance
“Because Fat Girl” joins a growing canon of romance novels challenging traditional narratives about who deserves love and success. While it may not be perfect, its very existence makes space for more diverse stories in the genre.
Comparable Titles
Readers who enjoy this novel might also appreciate:
- “One to Watch” by Kate Stayman-London
- “The Roommate” by Rosie Danan
- “Something to Talk About” by Meryl Wilsner
Final Verdict:
“Because Fat Girl” is a promising debut that succeeds more often than it stumbles. While some elements could be more polished, the novel’s heart and ambition make it a worthwhile read for anyone interested in:
- Contemporary romance with substance
- Hollywood behind-the-scenes stories
- LGBTQ+ representation
- Body positive narratives
- Complex family dynamics
The book’s greatest strength lies in its authenticity – both in its portrayal of the film industry and in its examination of personal identity. Though it occasionally falters in execution, its commitment to telling an honest story about learning to take up space – both literally and figuratively – in a world that often demands we shrink ourselves is admirable and necessary.
Reader Advisory
Content warnings include discussions of:
- Past sexual assault
- Disordered eating
- Grief and death
- Mental health struggles
- Discrimination and prejudice
“Because Fat Girl” reminds us that sometimes the most revolutionary act is refusing to apologize for who we are and what we want – whether that’s love, success, or both. While it may not be a perfect debut, it’s an important addition to the contemporary romance landscape and suggests Fleming is an author to watch.
